Why did you force the player into a sex scene with the ex-girlfriend character when they don't want her? I made it very clear on the phone that I didn't want anything to do with her, so why even bother giving the option if you're just going to railroad us like that?
Some characters are essential to the story. A couple of lines like “I don’t want her” can’t erase an entire narrative thread. This unfortunately isn’t a sandbox, and full control over every outcome just isn’t feasible in a story-driven VN. The choices there lead to some minor variations, but that’s about it. Fair warning, the MC has his own agency throughout, with many choices being more for optional scenes and dialogue that aren’t key to the plot. So if that’s a dealbreaker, this probably isn’t the game for you. Genuinely sorry. (Also, the line literally before that scene is: "Against better judgement, you decide to indulge her and worry about the ramifications later." but that's neither here nor there.) (Though, I do see how the 'choice-based' aspect in the description can be misleading. I've changed that now.) That sequence is already a heavily heavily toned-down version of what I originally had. Aria’s written very clearly as a yandere-type character, and whether that works for you or not is valid. I appreciate you playing and leaving feedback. I know not every scene will resonate with every player. I’m sorry if you felt rail-roaded, and thank you for at least giving me your time.
I mean, it's more than just 'a couple of lines', you give the player the option of seeing her or not, and then go 'whoops, sorry, that didn't count'. But yeah, I was looking for a choice-based game rather than a kinetic novel, so fair play on removing that but it really left a bad impression on me.
And yeah, I don't much like yandere types, but when the red text came up saying you had a bad feeling about saying no, I assumed that was going to lead into the unexpected death and revival you mentioned, so that would've been fine.
I will say you had nice models and designs, so you did good work there.
Bro i just finished the game and let me tell you it is ABSOLUTE CINEMA.. I hope developer does not discontinue the game because it is so PEAK.. Keep up the good work good sir/maam.
Nah Fam it's just too damn good. Sorry for the confusing cringey words but seriously, each Part keeps surprising me with something new. Damn Good Stuff.
A banger of a game, as someone who consumes copious amounts of koislop, ET is definitely a game worth playing. I really like the story so far and although it's obviously fairly new I see the sense of direction and look forward to the future, I really hope things work out with this series cause it's easily in my top 5 Itch VN's right now.
Thank you! And I'm a bit confused—there are custom animations in the game. Almost, if not all of them are. None are default animations, either they're completely custom or heavily modified from default. The previews just have a max of 5mb for gifs which is why they're like that. (only repeating 'frames' with minimal movement for only a few seconds) Unless you mean a completely different thing?
I just finished the update and was soooo good, i loved everything, especially Lucie, she's just so cute and her lore looks interesting, i know the update took more than planned but worth it, cant wait for next update! (And its ok if the updates are a bit late, what matter is that the quality is always good) (sorry for my bad english im still learning)
Havent played in a bit, came by to see if there was an update sinse my last play, and by the look of it, there is. Might play through it again, just because i loved the writing and characters(mostly the green haired girl..cant remember her name) alot!
Would definitely recommend playing it to anyone who's checking comments before downloading.
Wanted to leave a suggestion: When someone is talking, but we (the player) don't know who they are, use something like "Unknown Male Voice" "Unkown Girl", something like, cause if 2 NPCs are talking and we don't know their names, it's hard to figure out who's saying what
You're right, I'll keep that in mind. It's usually just "??" if it's a character that has relevance that will have their names revealed soon or blank if it's just a background character "" . Thanks for the suggestion
Just finished this and I got to say I'm impressed. The writing is good, the renders are good, solid pacing, overall a very good experience! I'm looking forward to seeing this grow! Great job Nev, keep it up!
it's amazing this project, there's a lot of stuff for the first release, and i really really enjoyed it, i'm very happy that i found it. Take care mate!
For a first version there sure is a lot of stuff, nice. Will this be more of a harem game, or more like Visual Novels with specific paths for each girl? Personally i'd prefer harem cause usually for these hentai games i'd rather go with everyone than having to choose, but ultimately i accept the vision the dev has to make the story flow.
Regardless, this has the potential to be one of the best free koikatsu-style hentai games on Itch, alongside Corrupted Kingdoms and Goddesses' Whim.
I've played a lot of these games, and yet I dont really leave comments on them. Many of them don't really reach me. That being said, I think the characters (especially Sera) are fun and adorable. This game has potential, and it'd be nice to see it continue to be worked on. Hoping things fall in your favour in that regard. Looking forward to more.
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Why did you force the player into a sex scene with the ex-girlfriend character when they don't want her? I made it very clear on the phone that I didn't want anything to do with her, so why even bother giving the option if you're just going to railroad us like that?
Some characters are essential to the story. A couple of lines like “I don’t want her” can’t erase an entire narrative thread. This unfortunately isn’t a sandbox, and full control over every outcome just isn’t feasible in a story-driven VN. The choices there lead to some minor variations, but that’s about it.
Fair warning, the MC has his own agency throughout, with many choices being more for optional scenes and dialogue that aren’t key to the plot. So if that’s a dealbreaker, this probably isn’t the game for you. Genuinely sorry.
(Also, the line literally before that scene is: "Against better judgement, you decide to indulge her and worry about the ramifications later." but that's neither here nor there.)
(Though, I do see how the 'choice-based' aspect in the description can be misleading. I've changed that now.)
That sequence is already a heavily heavily toned-down version of what I originally had. Aria’s written very clearly as a yandere-type character, and whether that works for you or not is valid.
I appreciate you playing and leaving feedback. I know not every scene will resonate with every player. I’m sorry if you felt rail-roaded, and thank you for at least giving me your time.
I mean, it's more than just 'a couple of lines', you give the player the option of seeing her or not, and then go 'whoops, sorry, that didn't count'. But yeah, I was looking for a choice-based game rather than a kinetic novel, so fair play on removing that but it really left a bad impression on me.
And yeah, I don't much like yandere types, but when the red text came up saying you had a bad feeling about saying no, I assumed that was going to lead into the unexpected death and revival you mentioned, so that would've been fine.
I will say you had nice models and designs, so you did good work there.
DAMN,notif came out just now but it was updated 8 hours ago.
i hate you Itch.
Game looks good. Quite enjoyable. Hope it doesnt gwt abandoned.
make Discord pls I hope this one isn't abandoned I'm still waiting for the new update😭
I Just finish the game in 1 Day lol
I wait the Update.
Bro i just finished the game and let me tell you it is ABSOLUTE CINEMA.. I hope developer does not discontinue the game because it is so PEAK.. Keep up the good work good sir/maam.
Still waiting for the update:))
会有中文吗
One of the best hentai game i played
Looking forward to more contents
agreed!
Bro this game looks pretty heavy from the photos but is the content inside is cool or just short currently?
bạn có thể thêm tiếng việt không
This is cool.
Hey! Cool game, i loved it. Amazing lore too, got me at the edge of my bed at all times.
One question though, any plans a for a discord server?
Thank you! No Discord plans for now—maybe once the game gains more traction.
Brother
What kind of Horrifying things you have summoned upon this realm
I'm sorry what?
Nah Fam it's just too damn good. Sorry for the confusing cringey words but seriously, each Part keeps surprising me with something new. Damn Good Stuff.
Hey, so far you did a crazy job. The game looks really good and i like where the story is going. Does the game has a discord already?
damm.you really do more part of Sera.TKS.I love you.and then wasn't any AI with the game. thank a lot what you did.
A banger of a game, as someone who consumes copious amounts of koislop, ET is definitely a game worth playing. I really like the story so far and although it's obviously fairly new I see the sense of direction and look forward to the future, I really hope things work out with this series cause it's easily in my top 5 Itch VN's right now.
wow, this game is good, i would love to see how you develop your characters, the story telling is good too.
there is a problem though, the 'black screen' frequency is a bit high, i think you don't need to add that much between scenes.
Any custom animations or plans to add them?
Renders look great btw.
Thank you! And I'm a bit confused—there are custom animations in the game. Almost, if not all of them are. None are default animations, either they're completely custom or heavily modified from default. The previews just have a max of 5mb for gifs which is why they're like that. (only repeating 'frames' with minimal movement for only a few seconds) Unless you mean a completely different thing?
Banger update, nice work dev
Thank you!
I just finished the update and was soooo good, i loved everything, especially Lucie, she's just so cute and her lore looks interesting, i know the update took more than planned but worth it, cant wait for next update! (And its ok if the updates are a bit late, what matter is that the quality is always good) (sorry for my bad english im still learning)
Thank you! That means a lot
i need more Sera please
Update When??
How can I know its update
Havent played in a bit, came by to see if there was an update sinse my last play, and by the look of it, there is. Might play through it again, just because i loved the writing and characters(mostly the green haired girl..cant remember her name) alot!
Would definitely recommend playing it to anyone who's checking comments before downloading.
Wanted to leave a suggestion: When someone is talking, but we (the player) don't know who they are, use something like "Unknown Male Voice" "Unkown Girl", something like, cause if 2 NPCs are talking and we don't know their names, it's hard to figure out who's saying what
You're right, I'll keep that in mind. It's usually just "??" if it's a character that has relevance that will have their names revealed soon or blank if it's just a background character "" . Thanks for the suggestion
Hello, fellow dev here.
Just wanted to know how I could privately message you to discuss something with you Nev.
If that would be okay with you.
Thanks.
And great job on your first update by the way.
-WinteryEdge
Hi! Sorry, I just saw this. I messaged you on discord
Just finished this and I got to say I'm impressed. The writing is good, the renders are good, solid pacing, overall a very good experience! I'm looking forward to seeing this grow! Great job Nev, keep it up!
When update
it's amazing this project, there's a lot of stuff for the first release, and i really really enjoyed it, i'm very happy that i found it. Take care mate!
For a first version there sure is a lot of stuff, nice. Will this be more of a harem game, or more like Visual Novels with specific paths for each girl? Personally i'd prefer harem cause usually for these hentai games i'd rather go with everyone than having to choose, but ultimately i accept the vision the dev has to make the story flow.
Regardless, this has the potential to be one of the best free koikatsu-style hentai games on Itch, alongside Corrupted Kingdoms and Goddesses' Whim.
Thank you! And it'll be more of a harem game
It's crazy how much content there is on the first release, looking forward for the following chapters. I really like your game.
This game is just wow, the last time I really wanted to read all the dialogues was in Corrupted kingdom
I hope that the developer will not abandon this game, and good luck in development
um jogo com bastante potencial eu diria, estou ansioso pela próxima atualização.
so espero que nenhuma garota fique de lado com o tempo.
I've played a lot of these games, and yet I dont really leave comments on them. Many of them don't really reach me. That being said, I think the characters (especially Sera) are fun and adorable. This game has potential, and it'd be nice to see it continue to be worked on. Hoping things fall in your favour in that regard. Looking forward to more.
Thank you! That means a lot
No footjob for now?
Spanish?
你有中文吗？
Loved everything about that you did with this game. The dialogue, events, story, animations, characters, honestly everything was really good.
Looking forward to future releases. Keep up the good work!
I plan to become pregnant in the future without NTR, which is very exciting